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See, any typos?
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I'm making this a habit to a WIP File first of comics before putting them everywhere as part of my editing process.
See, any place art needs editing?
Please, comment below?
I'm making this a habit to a WIP File first of comics before putting them everywhere as part of my editing process.
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Looks good. 
The dialogue in panel 4 is a little odd, but I get the gist and I'm not sure anyone will complain. I don't think I've ever heard a native English speaker say "high levels of RGB color", but I don't really know what a native English speaker would say -- essentially, I don't know what's wrong with the translation.
It might read a little easier for the dialogue in panel 5 to say "Thank god, all the guest strips have been pretty good so far".
Thanks, Zon!
The dialogue in panel 4 is a little odd, but I get the gist and I'm not sure anyone will complain. I don't think I've ever heard a native English speaker say "high levels of RGB color", but I don't really know what a native English speaker would say -- essentially, I don't know what's wrong with the translation.
It might read a little easier for the dialogue in panel 5 to say "Thank god, all the guest strips have been pretty good so far".
Thanks, Zon!