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Act 1: Cold Morning
Scene: Menu for a Perfect Family
Scene: Loveless Love
Act 2: Dinner
Scene: Better than Real
Act 3: Good Morning Son
English Newscaster (off screen):
2 Hench men:
TV Character 2 (off screen)
TV Character 1
Korean News Caster (off screen):
Mysterious Voice (off screen):
Alley with car wreck
Home Office converted from Son’s Bedroom
Act 1: Cold Morning
Ext: Night time in a park.
POV from Man. He is walking out of a car accident. The van that is crushed into the car has two people get out and chase him. They corner him in an alley way. One of them tazer’s him.
Fade to black and role opening credits while Radio Plays
SFX: A boy screams.
Reports of a new cellphone potentially accidentally killing people have lead investigators on a wild goose chase. It seem that today's modern detectives are not ready for technolo
Poetic PsychosisIn thirty seconds, the next shell would fall. Every night was the same, but every night Lorenzo experienced it as if it were the first time. His throat felt swollen; breathing was hard. He glanced around at the others; young men like him who had been shipped out in the name of honour and freedom. There was no honour in this, no freedom. Only death behind your eyelids, and a fear so gutting, that it carved out your innards and left you a hollow husk. Lorenzo tried to breathe, tried to assure himself that he was still whole, still made of flesh. They had lied when they told him he was ready.
Matteo ran towards him, arms out, rifle swinging uselessly at his side. He shouted for him to run, but Lorenzo remained motionless, unable to move as his friend’s warning was lost in the constant blare of gunfire. None of them were ready.
“The cycle is repeating. It is not safe.” The voice was soft and weak, yet it carried over the gunfire and battle cries without impediment.
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